Brilliant Fiction

Fiction & Nonfiction
Substantial Editing


I love learning the beauty of language and all of its possibilities. I’m here to help you edit and polish your manuscript.

We’ll look at continuity, characterization, plot; all of the elements of a good story. You will be given honest feedback.

Testimonials

“Virginia O’Dine is a fabulous editor, with an eagle eye and a penetrating mind. She knows how to help an author tell his or her story in the best possible way — the perfect writing coach.”

Robert J. Sawyer
Best-selling author

“Virginia has looked at every book in the San Angeles series and her feedback has been instructive and on point every time. Her background &experience comes through in her attention to not only the details of the manuscript, but the overall pacing and story. If you’re looking for an honest opinion of your work, and how to make it better, Virginia O’Dine is your editor.”

Gerald Brandt, author of the San Angeles Series (Daw)

“Working with Virginia brings you not only years of direct publishing experience (as an editor, a writer, a publisher, and an award panelist) but an enthusiasm to help you achieve your project’s full potential. Virginia is a gifted editor who will help you achieve the next level of success.”

Ryan T. McFadden (3-time Aurora award winning author)

“I consider myself fortunate to have had Virginia as the editor of my three
novels from Bundoran Press. She provided great insights on the story and
character arcs and made sure the final product was exactly the story I wanted to tell in the way I wanted to tell it. A very effective editor from concept to final text.”

Hayden Trenholm, author of the Steele Chronicles

           Short Fiction

5000 words and under – flat rate $75. Includes mark up and feedback as necessary. Completed work will not be returned to the client until payment in full has been received upon completion.
Average two weeks response time.

       Long Fiction

5,000+ words:  Completed work will not be returned to the client until payment in full has been received. 50% deposit upon accepted submission and 50% due upon completion.
1.5 cents per word.
Average one month response time.

The Process

Please query with 1 page summary and the first 5 pages (single spaced) to see if we’re a good fit. Then an editorial agreement will need to be signed and returned along with a deposit. (See below.)
All submissions and manuscripts are absolutely confidential. Occasionally I may ask permission to publicly share a passage as a teaching tool or just because it touched my heart.
I will return your manuscript with changes tracked, including notes within the text, plus a comprehensive written feedback. We can discuss afterwards either on the phone or via email/chat, your preference.

Email virginia(at)brilliantfiction.com